Showing posts with label Young Adult Fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Young Adult Fiction. Show all posts

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Writing 101: Page Critique - Ciara

Every Thursday the Writing 101 crew, Michael and Lauren, will critique a page from a novel. If you'd like your page critiqued, please fill out the Writing 101: Page Critique Form.

Congratulations to Ciara for being our very first page critique. First we present the page without comment:

Author: Ciara
Title: Untitled
Genre: Contemporary YA
1st Page (273 words)


I’m pretty sure my sister had decided to become a pagan or a Baptist or something before she off’d herself so I don’t know why we were having a Catholic funeral. I don’t believe in hell and she didn’t either, obviously, but I wonder when I see all these sad puffy eyed faces how many of them believe she’s burning now. Everyone says with their wringing hands that it’s such a waste but how long would she have to stay miserable to satisfy them? Maybe they only remember how she used to be before she got lost.
Our house is empty now of all the sombre tourist mourners paying to gape at our tragedy with their thoughtful lasagnes and endless pots of coffee. The ghost of condolences and morbid curiosity is hanging in the air on their stale cigarette smoke. But we’re alone now in this house separated by the gulf of our secret thoughts. Every day since she died has been leading up to the funeral and now that it’s all over I don’t know what we’re supposed to do. I don’t know if I’m allowed to go back in our room. My stomach turns over remembering how I used to wail about the unfairness of having to share a room with someone who would try to make my bed while I was sleeping in it and wave my own dirty socks in my face as proof that I never pick up after myself. I’ve been sleeping on the sofa since she died and no one has told me to go to bed so I guess that means I’m not supposed to.


What say you, readers of Paper Hangover? Did this first page intrigue you enough to read on? Please keep your criticisms constructive. Always be polite and considerate of the writer.

Michael's and Lauren's red line edits and then our overall comments after the jump.

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Writing 101: Page Critiques

If you would like to have a page from your novel critiqued by the Writing 101 crew, we are now taking submissions. (See the form below.) Every Thursday Michael and Lauren will critique a page from a novel.


Genres We Accept

We accept any genre under the YA umbrella (mainstream, paranormal, fantasy, sci-fi, et al.).


What We Will Critique

We will critique first pages and anything else you need feedback on.

The all important first page is essential to get right...but so is the rest of you novel. It's not chopped liver.

We recognize that sometimes you may need targeted feedback on a scene that doesn't take place on the very first page of your novel. This is why we're opening up the flood gates and allowing you to submit a random page from your novel.


How Will It Work?

Along with your submission, you'll simply tell us that your page is not the first page of your novel and you'll describe to us what exactly are you looking for in your critique.

For instance, you may need feedback on your love scene, or you might need direction for your fight scene, or maybe there's a craft technique that you're not quite sure you understand and you need an outsider's eyes to make sure you're on the right track.

Whatever your issue is just let us know. We will focus our critique towards your needs, directly targeting the specific area where you feel you may need the most help.


More Info

A random number generator will choose which page(s) we will critique that week.

Each week we will post one or two submitted pages to the blog, including our notes.

Readers of Paper Hangover will be encouraged to offer their own constructive criticisms in the comment section.


Monday, July 25, 2011

Meagn Curd Debut Author of Indie Published 'BRIDGER'

Today on Paper Hangover, Megan Curd joins the table. She has her steaming mug of coffee and is set to answer my probing questions on her new life as an indie debut author.
I met Megan a few years or so ago, before BRIDGER was finished, before the agent and the submission process and here she is all published and totally in control of the destiny of her publishing career.

Megan is wicked fun on Twitter, by the way!


Bridger is a self-published novel, what made you decide that path was for you?

I actually had an agent at one point, and was pursuing the traditional publishing route, but decided it wasn't for me. Some people may call me crazy for letting go of that option, but for me, I wanted to be able to be involved in the publication process. I wanted to see how the publishing process worked and get a good feel for everything. Going indie allowed me to stay involved in the process and be able to build a trust with the people I worked with. I know who is publishing my book. Soul Fire Press, Christopher Matthews Publishing, and Jeremy Soldevilla have been amazing to work with and we've come up with a great plan for Bridger. I'm confident in my decision to go indie, because it gives me the versatility to still be a part of the process, but also provides my readers with the best prices for my books. That's a win-win for me.

Tell us about Bridger...but don’t spoil it, I’m almost done...

Bridger was actually written after my friend encouraged me to try my hand at writing a novel. It was during winter finals at college in 2009, and I figured writing a book was a great way to put off studying. :) I remember calling my mom and telling her I was going to write a book, but I had to figure out what to write about. We Googled "cool legends" (super scientific, I know), and I found the Irish folklore than became the bedrock of Bridger. It was a lot of fun to write, and in the span of 5 weeks, the first draft was done. Of course the final version is quite different, but it was a blast laying down the first draft and watching where the characters drove the story. I have never experienced anything quite like creating Ashlyn's world. I owe my friend a huge thanks for pushing me to write. :)
Are there any sequels in the works, or is Bridger a stand alone novel?
I am already working on Bridger's sequel, TRAITOR. It's about a third of the way done, I think... but that'll depend on where Ashlyn and co. decide to take me. :) I'm hoping it will be available this coming spring, if everything works out the way I hope it will.

I’m sure you could publish a book already on Self-publishing, what have you learned that you never knew before?

Just to cover your bases on all the legalities that go into it! Book covers, images, even fonts need to be allowed to be used for commercial use. I never thought about things like that until I began this process. It's a huge deal to make sure your bases are covered and everything is legal. It's also a huge headache sometimes, haha. :)

You also make book trailers, pretty amazing ones too. How did you get in to that side business and how does it feel when the author loves the finish product?

I actually used my good friend and fellow author, Hope Collier, as my first guinea pig for a book trailer. I just decided one evening to try my hand at it. I absolutely love anything to do with graphic design and social media outlets. I'm actually designing my new webpage right now, as well. Anything that has to do with audio/visual outlets, I enjoy. I guess I'm just a creative soul. I love to create things, be it via my books, book covers, or trailers. I love watching them come to life. Working with fellow authors and knowing I'm meeting their needs, fulfilling what they "see" for their book, that's huge to me. I love it when they're gushing about something, and I love it even when they're saying, "hey, this isn't right." Coming up with the feel for the book and the look they're going for is such a rush. I love the creation process. The end results when they're happy, that's just something that can't be explained. It makes the job worth it when they're happy.

What’s next for Megan Curd?
Next on the docket is getting THE GUARDIAN CHRONICLES: FORBIDDEN, primed and ready for public consumption! It's being edited right now, adding some fun stuff in places, cleaning up other areas. It's a new YA series I'm working on, but it can stand alone as well. I'm kind of wanting to see how readers take to it. If there's a good response, I've left it open for future novels. I'm hoping people like it... the main character and I really bonded, so I'd love to keep him alive for a while. :)

And just for fun...What can’t you write without?
I can't write without music, and while it's not a necessity, I write better when I'm at Acoustic Cafe. It's a little local cafe in Eau Claire, WI, and I LOVE their chili and turtle mochas. I could take stock in them. It's sad when they all know what you're going to order before you even get up to the register, but I go there a lot just to people watch, be in the nice environment, and enjoy the music. They have live music a lot of nights, so it's a pretty cool place to go. If anyone ever ends up passing through Eau Claire, you definitely have to hit up the Acoustic. Get the Texas Chili. :)

Thanks so much Megan for joining us on Paper Hangover today, please come back later in the year and update us on your progress. Wishing you lots of luck as you travel through your publishing career.

You can purchase BRIDGER here and follow Megan on Twitter, she is even on Facebook and has a blog.